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I love the moral of the story. How he sacrificed one moment to save a life which in return became a family. Perfect rhyming all the way through. The vocabulary was decent, though I'd search a few new words here and there. I could vision every line that you set, I could see the little boy on that cold night all the way to sharing this story with his family by a warm fire that Christmas day, the setting was accurate as well. The very best gift to share with the world, is one like this I tell you. Thanks.
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